whoo! New leader!

[olivelovesmilk]

Breezefur opened his eyes wide with tiredness. Today was the day when he would get his nine lives. He had heard from leaders and Medicine cats that the nine lives hurt like long sharp claws ripping your stomach open! The tom suddenly realized he was shivering. No! It can't be from fright! He thought. All his life Breezestar had always thought that he was the strongest and most bravest of all the clan cats in the forest. But for him to shiver at the littlest thing like getting his nine lives that was the wrost thing he'd ever done.

As breezefur waited for the Windclan medicine cat to give him some traveling herbs, the black and white tom busyed himself at pulling out grass from the wet ground. Breezefur had always been a restless cat. His father had always said keep yourself busy and from then on he couldn't stop twiching. But how Breezefur wanted to stop and rebel what his father had said to do. He was clan leader now, Breezefur didn't need to listen to anyone now! Plus his father was no dumber than a new born kit born a day ago. He had fallin in love with a lame Riverclan cat who had given Breezefur instead of razing he and his siblings in Riverclan. Piece of Foxdung! He spat. I hate her! If I ever see her again. I'll rip her to shreds and say to her "look at me now the son you gave up became leader of Windclan the fastest clan ever!

WILL FINISH LATER!

[~Moonflower~]

Olive, your Breezefur/star bio hasn't been accepted yet. You aren't allowed to post with your character until it is accepted.

[Olive]

yes i can Breezestar is up in the leader place! And both Nighty and Rainy said it was fine!

[~Moonflower~]

You need to finish your personality, history, and description, all of which need to be longer. Just because Breezestar is in the leader spot on the WindClan bar doesn't mean you can post if you haven't finished your bio to a certain degree. I won't delete this post, but you do need to finish your bio first.